Tip 50. Common errors in opening sentences.
How many errors can you find here?
"Dear Mr White,
referring to your email on 13 June, thank You for your invitation to offer for the legal Due Diligence investigation in relation with the Project."
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Correct answer!
Errors:
- Capitalisation at the beginning of the sentence
- 'Referring' should be 'In reference to' or 'With reference to'
- 'email on' should be 'email of/dated'
- 'You' should be 'you'.
- 'invitation to offer' should be 'invitation to tender'
- 'in relation with' should be 'in relation to' (or simply 'for')




